Top positive review
Decent story, but some flaws
Reviewed in the United States 🇺🇸 on December 28, 2021
This book holds a very decent LitRPG story, with a good cast of characters and some easy conflict. However, there are some errors to be addressed:
~ "Gladiuses" should be "gladii".
~ There are various instances where two independent clauses were put in one sentence—this error is called a run-on sentence.
All in all, any gamer/reader would enjoy this book, and possibly give them a bit of nostalgia from some of the references.
The 4/5 rating is for the great story that overshadows the typographical and sentence structure errors of the story.